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Sorry by ~Pokeaholic:iconPokeaholic:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Fixed


There are a million ways i could say I'm sorry,
But not one would make it right,
How i wish things hadn't turned out so badly,
How i wish we hadn't started that fight,
I wish we had done things differently,
I wish it hadn't gone wrong,
But now things are icy between you and me,
The bond between us is gone,
No matter what i do or say,
It will never be the same again,
But really it's both of us having to pay,
We caused each other to much pain,
We didn't have to let things get so bad,
Now there's too many wounds to mend,
The payment for letting myself get so mad,
Is losing you as a friend
©2005-2009 ~Pokeaholic
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Author's Comments

Something i wrote for one of my ex-friends, who i dont think will be able 2 be my friend again coz together we ruined things.

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~An-Ode-To-No-one Apr 2, 2005, 1:26:06 PM
awww thts really sweet :hug: it sorta has the same meaning as my Sorry poem if u read it...i feel so bad about wot i did...n nothin will make me see different
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~the-light-is-blindin Apr 3, 2005, 4:44:34 AM
Thats very nice poem im sure you and your friend will work it out if your friendship means that much to both of you then you cant let some stupid argument come between you
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~Angsty-Poet Jan 21, 2006, 8:20:15 AM
Yeah I remember when me and my best friend got in a fight and I wrote her a note with a sorry poem in it telling her how sorry I was that we had to be fighting and how i remembered how good of friends we were. She forgave me but in the end we stopped being friends but I'll still remember that cuz she nearly cried when she read it. :hug: This is really good...:D

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You broke me: I should have known it when I saw your eyes were blue. Eyes as cold as ice. Eyes as cold as you.

-Wendy AKA Charllie-
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~Pokeaholic Jan 22, 2006, 9:02:01 AM
it hurts when u fall out with ur close mates doesnt it...:hug:...altho now me and the guy who this was written 4 have a kinda mutual understanding where neither of us talks 2 the other lol...i broke his heart apparently...yeah...
thankies :D

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:poke: :heart: Don't Cry Because It's Over, Smile Because It Happened :heart: :poke:

~I'd~Take~Your~Tears~If~I~Could~

x~*~x PiErS x~*~x
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~Angsty-Poet Jan 22, 2006, 11:47:44 AM
Yeah, It does hurt but with time the pain goes away. I'm sorry that you have to see him though, when I lost my best friend I only had to see her for half a year before she got home schooled and since then things have gotten a lot better.

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You broke me: I should have known it when I saw your eyes were blue. Eyes as cold as ice. Eyes as cold as you.

-Wendy AKA Charllie-
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~Pokeaholic Jan 22, 2006, 12:11:40 PM
lol i dont care i find it rather funny =p (im so mean)

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:poke: :heart: Don't Cry Because It's Over, Smile Because It Happened :heart: :poke:

~I'd~Take~Your~Tears~If~I~Could~

x~*~x PiErS x~*~x
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~nowatruebeliever Mar 4, 2006, 6:32:41 AM
I've started at the beginning and I like it, no i love it, its short but speaks with so much passion

This is really sparky *giggles*, so many feelings :D
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~Pokeaholic Mar 5, 2006, 2:20:43 PM
thanku very much :D and thanks for the fave
lol u cud be there a while if u are gonna read em all from the beginning =p

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:poke: :heart: :D SMILE!!!!!!!! :D :heart: :poke:

~I'd~Take~Your~Tears~If~I~Could~

All I Ask Is Honesty~Comment, I Won't Cry

x~*~x Piers x~*~x
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~nowatruebeliever Mar 5, 2006, 4:59:36 PM
It's quite alright comment buddy, I just read it and was like WOW!!!!!!!!

Is there any poems you would like me to read then or just scroll my way through your mass pile of art!!! :D
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